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Post by Bymaria on Feb 25, 2018 21:23:24 GMT
So... I think this is one of those tasks nobody enjoys, but our World Factbook Entry seems in need of an update. Thought I’d find suggestions here that we can share and comment on. Here’s the current WFE:
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Post by germanempire on Feb 27, 2018 18:13:45 GMT
A mention of the (not entirely Set up "Mentor-Programe"), to let people know there is a way to get organised help, would be great.
PS: I am working on a form to send to our current citizens to apply for a "place" in the programe if they'd like to help.
PPS: @fortwhile would you be so kind to make it possible to have a forum thread (where ever you deem it to fit) for the Mentor programe HQ?
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Post by Bymaria on Feb 27, 2018 19:07:43 GMT
I think a welcome telegram including that would be really good!
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 19, 2018 11:26:21 GMT
I think it would be a really good thing to add a lot about the forum to it; sort of a push to get people to join.
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Post by Bymaria on Mar 19, 2018 20:58:54 GMT
And perhaps the links closer to the top.
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 19, 2018 23:16:09 GMT
Welcome to Londinium! Here, everyone has a spot among us! Founded August 2017, Londinium is a great place to meet new friends.
Priding ourselves on Strength, Unity and Self-Determination, Londinium is a vibrant kingdom of diverse nations. Move your nation here today to help forge a more powerful region and make the most of this golden opportunity. Please join the off-site forum, registering under your nation name! They're a great place to hang out, get involved in government and much, much more! Please come join us and make your mark on Londinium! If you don't join our forums, you'll be missing out on all the fun! Please come and play games, debate on and submit legislation, and discuss the future of our region. Our region is a constitutional monarchy, meaning we have an active Sovereign while the people retain most of the power. All nation types are welcome: please make sure to introduce yourself on the Regional Message Board!
Please ask questions if you have them! The RMB is an option for this, however if you want a quick reply, please message someone on the forum or on Discord.
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 19, 2018 23:16:49 GMT
Was I too pushy with the forum?
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Post by Fortwhile on Mar 20, 2018 6:00:36 GMT
I think selling the forum harder in the WFE is a good idea. Two thoughts: it seems maybe a little excessively colorful, and it's a lot of text. Maybe try pairing down the copy a little bit?
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Post by germanempire on Mar 20, 2018 6:49:09 GMT
How about you add the Mentor Program as one of the mentions, if you cut down on Text a bit? I dont know if I get annoying with this program but it needs to be included.
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Post by Bymaria on Mar 20, 2018 7:15:54 GMT
Nyelant you can’t change text size or alignment with the WFE.
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 20, 2018 10:47:18 GMT
I didn't know that, but no problem. I'll cut down on the text and add the Mentor Programme.
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 20, 2018 11:42:23 GMT
Welcome to the Union of Londinium! Political Parties :: Regional Forum :: Constitution :: Welcome Notice :: Discord :: The Media Welcome to Londinium! Here, everyone has a spot among us! Founded August 6, 2017, Londinium is a vibrant kingdom of diverse nations. Priding ourselves on Strength, Unity and Self-Determination, our region is a constitutional monarchy, meaning we have an active Sovereign while the people retain most of the power. Please join the off-site forum, registering under your nation name. They're a great place to hang out, get involved in government and much, much more. Please come join us and make your mark on Londinium! If you don't join our forums, you'll be missing out on all the fun! Come and play games, debate on and submit legislation, and discuss the future of our region. Please ask questions if you have them! Our new mentors from the Mentor Programme are the ones you should look to. They'll make getting around and introducing yourself a breeze!
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 20, 2018 11:47:59 GMT
Shorter but more concise and with the Mentor Programme added. Thoughts?
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Post by Bymaria on Mar 20, 2018 19:25:25 GMT
I think this looks great - I much prefer these colours too. The last paragraph just has too many exclamation marks, in my opinion. In any case it’s still an improvement to the last.
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Post by Nyelant on Mar 20, 2018 19:37:09 GMT
Instead of making a new post I'll just edit the last one.
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